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लेख की कमियाँ[संपादित करें]
लेख में अभी भी बड़ी-बड़ी कमियाँ हैं जिन्हें सुधारे बिना लेख अर्थहीन प्रतीत होता है:
- ... प्रतिवर्ष सम्मानित करने की चैम्पियनशिप ट्रॉफी... क्या बिना किसी प्रतियोगिता के ही यह ट्रॉफी प्रदान की जाती है?
- ... उस समय के गवर्नर जनरल थे। => कौनसे समय की बात हो रही है?
- भूमिका का दूसरा पैराग्राफ (मूल कप चांदी से बना है और....) पूर्णतया मशीनी अनुवाद है और जो अनुवाद लिखा हुआ है उसमें भी पर्याप्त मात्रा में टपोरी भाषा प्रयुक्त है।
इस लेख में भूमिका में ही इतने सुधार आवश्यक हैं। इसके बाद आगे के सुझाव दिये जायेंगे।☆★संजीव कुमार (✉✉) 06:06, 25 दिसम्बर 2014 (UTC)
- @संजीव कुमार: your very 1st question shows you knowledge about NHL which happens to be zero
- read carefully its written as नैशनल हॉकी लीग के फाइनल में विजेता को प्रतिवर्ष सम्मानित करने की चैम्पियनशिप ट्रॉफी है। which means the team that wins the finals only get this trophy as there are many others trophies that are awarded to different teams for different reasons but only final winner get this trophy. Because of which this trophy gets special mention and more respect
- for your second doubt--i knew that non-ice hockey people might ask such vague question so thats why a reference is added it would have been very help for you to click on reference instead of showing you knowledge level.....this is the reason why wikipedia insist on adding reference
- you third question again shows you lack of knowledge about NHL and you uneasiness to click on references to know more.......there are two stanley cups the original 1 is too much fragile now to be used in award ceremony so it is in HHF and a replica is used inplace of it........original 1 is made of pure silver and replica is made of an alloy.....it is attached on top the rings this can be seen easily in the picture
- fourthly i suggest why dont you write this page in rajasthani hindi......as we (especially me) are eager to see you write for once.......as most the time you are either messaging on talk pages or just reverting the edit or deleting the pages so for a change we will be able to see you skills as contributor to wikipedia of which you happens to be an non sleepy admin......
- for more info read en:Stanley Cup as this might enlighten you as you are shy to click on references
- --come on pick up a cause.....
Darth Whale वार्ता 06:35, 25 दिसम्बर 2014 (UTC)
- I agree that I don't have knowledge about NHL. So, I would like to ask other guys who can review this article, so I can see it on Main Page.☆★संजीव कुमार (✉✉) 06:38, 25 दिसम्बर 2014 (UTC)
- @संजीव कुमार: there is no better place to get info about legendary stanley cup than HOCKEY HALL OF FAME(this is the place where original cup is located for display).....you can access it by click here 1, here 2 and here 3.......stanley cup is most easily recognizable cup because of its strange shape and size........ Darth Whale वार्ता 06:48, 25 दिसम्बर 2014 (UTC)
